Octavia Lafleur had a
miserable life. Her father died when she was only three years old. Her mother
remarried less than a year later. Her stepfather sexually abused her when she
was eight. At fourteen, she had her first sexual experience with a boy. Her
mother died when she was fifteen. She married an alcoholic oilfield worker when
she was seventeen, and from then on, rode a roller coaster of alcohol abuse,
prostitution, and homelessness. Then, when her life was at its lowest point,
she met Snook, an illiterate helper at a local grocery store, and her life
changed.
She needed a place to
stay, and Snook longed to learn how to read and write, so she followed him to
his remote shack in the country and moved in. At first, she figured that her
arrangement with him would include sex, but to her surprise, he didn't seem to
be interested in that. As Snook learned to read and write, Octavia realized
that he was not as simple as she first thought. She was enjoying her new life
with him.
Then a miracle
happened, and it turned her world upside down again.
"The
Miracle" is a long short story that follows the life of a woman from her
earliest memories to the miraculous ending. Here is the beginning:
***
It was a miserably
cold Louisiana day. Low dark clouds surged in from the north, pushing ahead of
them a frigid wind that bent trees and rattled tin roofs. A mix of rain and ice
coated everything in its path causing trees to rattle like skeletons. The temperature
was just at freezing, but the wind and the icy rain made it feel much colder.
Octavia Lafleur sat
on her front porch and rocked back and forth oblivious to the cold. She stared
past the frozen fallowed fields, past the serpentine lane that led from Snook's
shack to the graveled road, past everything to a point on the horizon where
dark clouds met the frozen land, looking altogether like a giant black hole
sucking everything it touched, houses, trees, and fields, into its dark
interior.
The cold penetrated
the thin shirt she wore, but she felt nothing, her heart as cold as the wintry
wind cutting through her.
***
I hope you
appreciate and enjoy "The Miracle." It is a story dear to my heart
for it loosely mirrors the journey someone dear to me followed and contains an
ending that it might have taken.
Intriguing beginning! Sounds like a good story.
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