In the last blog, you met Amanda Smith. In
this one, you will see how she reacted to her daughter's abduction. On August
12, 1980, while swimming with her friend, Joey, someone killed Joey and
abducted Jeanne Smith. Thirty-four years later, authorities had no idea who
kidnapped her or where she was. Amanda Smith, Jeanne's mother, dying of cancer,
in a last chance attempt to find her daughter, hired John LeGrand, the Cajun
PI. What John discovers is a string of missing girls spanning four decades. This
is the premise of my new work in progress. The following scene will never make
it into the book; however, it will give me an idea of is happening in the
background. Next week, you'll meet Jeanne.
Amanda
Smith
August 12,
1980
Amanda usually
staffed the desk near the entrance to the Helping Hands Nursing Home when she
wasn't working with the residents. The home was a plantation-style building,
which housed the elderly and the infirmed. A former member of the Louisiana
Society of Helping Hands had willed the building and the two hundred plus acres
surrounding it to the charitable organization with the stipulation that it be
turned into a low-cost nursing home. Kristin Ivers, a nurse and her supervisor,
was passing on some instructions to Amanda when two Ellisonville Police
Department officers walked in. For some reason, she could not explain, she
shivered at the sight of the two men.
When the
overweight red-faced man walked to the desk and asked for Amanda Smith, she
knew it would not be good news, but when he told her that Jeanne was missing,
and Joey had been shot, it was the worst possible news she could have imagined.
She took a deep breath, held it in for a few seconds and then exhaled. She had
to be calm—find out what it all meant.
"What do
you mean 'missing'?" she asked in an even and controlled voice.
The red-faced
officer turned to his partner, who nodded.
"We think…That
is, the state police believe she was kidnapped."
When she heard
the word, kidnapped, she blinked.
"Who would
do such a thing?"
"We don't
know yet, ma'am."
"I see."
Amanda took another deep breath. She felt as if she were losing control, but
she had to find out what happened.
"Are you
all right, Mandy?" Kristin asked.
Amanda shook
her off with a wave of her arm. She had to concentrate.
"You say
Joey was shot. Is he dead?"
Again, the
red-faced officer looked at his partner, and he nodded again.
"Yes, ma'am."
"Oh, my
God," Kristin exclaimed and placed a hand on Amanda's shoulder.
"How was
he shot?" Amanda asked.
"Ma'am, we're
not allowed to give out any more information than that."
She nodded.
"Was my
daughter shot, also?" She resisted the urge to cross her fingers,
something she did as a child when faced with bad news.
"We don't
think so."
"Ma'am."
The other police officer, a tall dark man with a buzz cut, stepped forward. He
had been standing back until then, watching her reaction closely. "We need
some pictures of your daughter for identification purposes and maybe a couple
of articles of clothing for the dogs."
"Dogs?"
"Bloodhounds."
"Of
course." Amanda took a step forward, but her legs would not work. She
could not support herself, and she fell, seated on the wood floor. Then the
grief and despair overwhelmed her, and she let out a howl that reverberated
from wall to wall in the old building. Then she sobbed, a series of convulsive
explosion that emptied her lungs of air, and she knew she was going to die.
She was going
to die without ever knowing if her daughter was alive or dead.
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